Young Couples First Kiss Poem by louis rams

Young Couples First Kiss

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a young couple walking the darkness at night
wanting to experience their first kiss of delight.
he had a knot in his stomach which he could
not explain, and she like him felt the same.

anticipation growing to an extreme height
not letting one another, out of their sight.
they grasped each others hand and continued the walk
she became hesitant, and started to balk.

he squeezed her hand a little tight
and told her it was alright.
they found a secluded spot where no one could see
then they held each other and kissed passionatly.

a kiss so passionate, that it could
not be explained, and their lives
would never be the same.
they pulled apart and looked into each others eyes
a feeling so strong that it could not be denied.

they learned about the first kiss, and thought
about other things, that they must have missed.
so they decided to go a little further
and experiment a little more
and found themselves on the floor.

the passion started to rise faster than
a flaming fire, filling them with desire.
they knew in their hearts that it could not be
they would hurt themselves, and their families.

so they stopped at a point of no return
and just let their fires burn.
they had finally experienced their first kiss
and knew that it was something that they
would forever miss.

they walked away hand in hand
and a smile on their face
and their hearts, beating in a rapid pace.

the rememberance of that fist kiss
will always stay, it is a memory
that will never go away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather S 09 May 2009

awww, this is such a cute poem and i hope that one day i will feel the same about someone in my life thanks for making my day heather

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2009

a young couple walking the darkness at night wanting to experience their first kiss of delight. he had a knot in his stomach which he could not explain, and she like him felt the same.......great dilema but beautifully expressed in wordds... i loved it most....10 read mien love at first sight... friendship on line

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Sandra Fowler 12 May 2009

Time will have us all, but memories are forever. Nice one. Kind regards, Sandra

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Kranthi Pothineni 11 May 2009

Memories are the place were most of us live in. Good one.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 10 May 2009

the rememberance of that fist kiss will always stay, it is a memory that will never go away........................A Passionate Write.........

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charming an delightful poem.

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