Only Yours


Young Soldier - Poem by Only Yours

Stay calm soldier
Do not panic
Stay calm soldier
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Comments about Young Soldier by Only Yours

  • Rookie Awa Bah (4/8/2014 5:11:00 PM)

    the soldier is not happy.
    true Christopher Moore
    execellent peace (Report) Reply

    4 person liked.
    1 person did not like.
  • Rookie Christopher Moore (2/2/2013 10:07:00 AM)

    Soldiers don't run they observe and react...still nicely put though (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Avi Pranish (7/6/2011 7:51:00 PM)

    Very sad, I like how well you captured the feeling of helplessness. Rate 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Coroline Smith (9/2/2010 6:32:00 PM)

    my faince was in the army which the poems reminds me of (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points i bring Chaos and Order in my life (12/22/2009 11:55:00 AM)

    i like it, i know how this person feels about the solider coming back home because my dad was in the army so i know that feeling of such utter helplessness.10-10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Kim (9/21/2009 9:53:00 PM)

    When I was young, I was soildier. I was brave and good fihter.Yet I'm not old man.
    My young comlade in arms died. I know the sadness. This poem's expression is good about young soldier. I read very well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jeremiah Gorman (9/5/2009 6:46:00 PM)

    really emotional and very well written 10-10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Meg Lealand (5/29/2009 7:14:00 AM)

    That's really sad. I get the message and it's a great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Robert Del Real (5/18/2009 12:08:00 AM)

    I really like this sincerly i alays wanted to go to the war but im too young and people say im gonna die but i want to get away from the war outside of my door and autully fight for a war thats for freedom (Report) Reply








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