Your Beautiful Brown Eyes Poem by Cristina Teodor
Your Beautiful Brown Eyes
I'm looking at the sky, so peaceful, so sublime,
This peace invading my being when,
Are shining serene to my heart,
Your beautiful brown eyes.
The way you hold me in your arms,
The way the stars are shining,
I'm feeling the mystery of life,
Through your beautiful brown eyes.
When you say that you love me,
Being there, showing you care,
Nothing in this world matters,
Only your beautiful brown eyes.
Even the day is coming with sun shining bright on sky,
Even night is falling with a glowing moonlight,
My sun, my moon will always be,
Your beautiful brown eyes.
Essence of life, magic of moment,
Make me feel so alive,
Amazing how much happiness shines,
In your beautiful brown eyes.
Lovely poem indeed. Would be even better with a few small fixes: Lines three, six and thirteen should have SHINING instead of SHINNING. Line eleven - - in English, we don't use double negatives like they do in Spanish, Portuguese, and other romance languages (probably including your native Romanian) . To be grammatically correct, this line should say NOTHING IN THIS WORLD MATTERS,
wow, this is amazing did he read it already he must be very proud and you are one good poet for having thought of a cute poem about his brown eyes MABUHAY
Hope that beautiful brown eyes read this...a beautiful colorful poem...When souls possessed by spirit of love that make writing move so 'wow' :) _Unwritten Soul
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 10:35:43 PM # 1.0.0.1119
This is a great love poem, Cristina. The magic of loving eyes, full of wonder, wonderful! Keep writing Cristina, you are a talented poetess.