Your Eyes Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Your Eyes

Rating: 5.0


Your eyes beheld me
Flooded with a deluge of affection
Imprisoning me in depths unmeasured

Your gaze was long and penetrative
It made me flinch and reel
It cut through me like a dagger
I couldn’t escape its fire
I couldn’t break its chains

Your eyes, deep as ocean
Your eyes, seeing as wisdom
Your eyes, full as love
Your eyes, burning as hell
Your eyes, your eyes
I loved and feared.

Monday, November 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 06 January 2016

love, experience, intimacy, passion, desire. all well expressed in your poem. thank you for this wonderful poem. tony

1 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad 12 January 2016

Your eyes, your eyes I loved and feared. I see fear of the poetess as her own inner fears of ecstasy that the wine of loving eyes can bring for her. An amazing poem.

1 0 Reply

Pregnant with a passion that can only be felt by the heart and seen with eyes!

1 0 Reply
Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2022

This poem can be viewed from aesthetic angle. I am not sure if you are describing the eyes of your beloved who is a living God to you or eyes of your only protector, God... loved this fascinating poem.

0 0 Reply
M Asim Nehal 01 March 2018

Beyond words just EYES.............Lovely Poem NI....Loved it

1 0 Reply

Its passion increases with every read! Well done Nosheen!

1 0 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2016

Affection! Love and dreams. Nice work.

1 0 Reply
Valsa George 12 February 2016

It cut through me like a dagger I couldn’t escape its fire I couldn’t break its chains How much of power, how much of magic....... how much of might, how much wizardry those eyes carried! It could equally ignite in you flames of passion as well as fear! Powerful portrayal..... Nosheen!

1 0 Reply
Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
Close
Error Success