Your Eyes Poem by Robin Miller

Your Eyes

Rating: 5.0


Your eyes

Your eyes are deep
With love and happiness
When they glow in the sun its like looking in the ocean
So peaceful and quite
Your smile is breath taking
When you touch me its like I am in heaven when you say I love you,
You mean it but deep down I know u don’t care cuz you all ways
Hurt me all the time
you say one thing and do another
you say you will never hit me at all but you did
you say all of these things that was never true at all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melissa Jamison 23 July 2009

i like it but maybe spell out words like 'you'. But it has a nice meaning, please read some of mine. Just type in 'Deal With a Demon', its one of mine :) keep writing just remember puntuation and grammar! good luck!

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