Ali Rizwan

Rookie (25.05.94 / Pakistan)

Your Face - Poem by Ali Rizwan

I love your smile, its just so nice
Your face is so pretty, I always look thrice
Your eyes, sweety i love that hazel in your eyes
And your face makes me go crazy as mice
Id like to hold you in my arms
To show you my delightful charms
When we hug, its like im flying in the sky
When you look at me I go so high,
When i saw you for the first time
To see a glimpse of that smile, Id do any crime
Before I met you, my life was hell
But now around me you made a love shell
Just one hug made me realize
That in love id have to specialize
When I see your hair and see those curls
Id like to compliment you as they look like pearls
I really love your face
When ever I see it I get embraced

Comments about Your Face by Ali Rizwan

  • Silver Star - 3,220 Points Agatha Eliza (10/21/2015 1:11:00 AM)

    A beautiful declaration of love put in verses.10 +++ (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 45,481 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (10/21/2014 11:29:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,190 Points Kay Staley (10/21/2014 9:49:00 AM)

    Even though the rhyme scheme is ridiculously simple, it can still be appreciated for its slight allusion to a poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,767 Points Patricia Grantham (10/21/2014 6:47:00 AM)

    This is a really beautiful poem. You have to appreciate the many
    faces of beauty. Very romantic with many praises. Good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 137 Points Rigzin Namgyal (10/21/2013 10:08:00 PM)

    amazing poetry..what a way to describe a face..and only a poet in love can have that magic.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 867 Points Liliana ~el (10/21/2013 7:47:00 PM)

    Nice; somewhat flawed
    True emotion spilled like gorgeous paint in glistening reflection
    Love the similes (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,254 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/21/2013 11:42:00 AM)

    It's a beautiful poem. One writes this kind of poem when one is 'In Love'.
    If you have time, please go through some of mine too and offer a few words as feedback.
    A point to note: Each of the ten readers' comments below has been disliked by 2 persons. None has liked any. Is it an act of sabotage? (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 877 Points marvin brato (10/21/2013 3:28:00 AM)

    lovely poem, romantic! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,093 Points Wahab Abdul (10/21/2012 9:47:00 AM)

    great poem on love! keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,414 Points Leslie Philibert (10/21/2012 6:17:00 AM)

    Solid write with good rhymes! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 438 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/5/2012 8:36:00 AM)

    wonderful love poem with a lot of bright emotions. well, good work, keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anne Catherine Mccord (9/9/2011 4:36:00 PM)

    I cant belive that you didnt wote this about me sweety <3.......Denise is a very lucky girl.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dane Fagerson (9/9/2011 4:26:00 PM)

    SPEECHLESS! ! ! ! ! .....Damn it took me away dude :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alex Melinov (9/9/2011 4:17:00 PM)

    very expressive.......looks like you love her alot <3 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 165 Points Romeo Della Valle (4/17/2011 10:11:00 AM)

    A very well penned and poignant write that shows the heart and talent you got! Keep it up! Thanks for sharing,10+++ Love and Peace for always! ... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chelsea Mcgriffin (12/3/2010 2:11:00 AM)

    I LOVE DIS POEM...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chelsea Mcgriffin (12/3/2010 2:10:00 AM)

    im a big fan...i mean ur 16 n u could write this waiting for your second poem........<3 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 2, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, October 7, 2011

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