Ali Rizwan

Rookie (25.05.94 / Pakistan)

Your Face - Poem by Ali Rizwan

I love your smile, its just so nice
Your face is so pretty, I always look thrice
Your eyes, sweety i love that hazel in your eyes
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Comments about Your Face by Ali Rizwan

  • Gold Star - 33,343 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (10/21/2014 11:29:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,599 Points Kay Staley (10/21/2014 9:49:00 AM)

    Even though the rhyme scheme is ridiculously simple, it can still be appreciated for its slight allusion to a poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,236 Points Patricia Grantham (10/21/2014 6:47:00 AM)

    This is a really beautiful poem. You have to appreciate the many
    faces of beauty. Very romantic with many praises. Good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 137 Points Rigzin Namgyal (10/21/2013 10:08:00 PM)

    amazing poetry..what a way to describe a face..and only a poet in love can have that magic.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 867 Points Liliana ~el (10/21/2013 7:47:00 PM)

    Nice; somewhat flawed
    True emotion spilled like gorgeous paint in glistening reflection
    Thanks!
    Love the similes (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,769 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/21/2013 11:42:00 AM)

    It's a beautiful poem. One writes this kind of poem when one is 'In Love'.
    If you have time, please go through some of mine too and offer a few words as feedback.
    A point to note: Each of the ten readers' comments below has been disliked by 2 persons. None has liked any. Is it an act of sabotage? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points marvin brato (10/21/2013 3:28:00 AM)

    lovely poem, romantic! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,844 Points Wahab Abdul (10/21/2012 9:47:00 AM)

    great poem on love! keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,181 Points Leslie Philibert (10/21/2012 6:17:00 AM)

    Solid write with good rhymes! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 341 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/5/2012 8:36:00 AM)

    wonderful love poem with a lot of bright emotions. well, good work, keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anne Catherine Mccord (9/9/2011 4:36:00 PM)

    I cant belive that you didnt wote this about me sweety <3.......Denise is a very lucky girl.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dane Fagerson (9/9/2011 4:26:00 PM)

    SPEECHLESS! ! ! ! ! .....Damn it took me away dude :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alex Melinov (9/9/2011 4:17:00 PM)

    very expressive.......looks like you love her alot <3 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points Romeo Della Valle (4/17/2011 10:11:00 AM)

    A very well penned and poignant write that shows the heart and talent you got! Keep it up! Thanks for sharing,10+++ Love and Peace for always! ... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chelsea Mcgriffin (12/3/2010 2:11:00 AM)

    I LOVE DIS POEM...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chelsea Mcgriffin (12/3/2010 2:10:00 AM)

    im a big fan...i mean ur 16 n u could write this good...im waiting for your second poem........<3 (Report) Reply










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