Your Glance Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Your Glance

Rating: 5.0


The sound of footsteps
Echoed round the wall
The love's death
Cast blight on my all
Years of being left out in the sin
Rusts my thin heart within

Please
Give me a chance
Threw the flashlight beam
Into my heart
Your glance

(2008/9/25)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 25 September 2008

When a man is touched by love, uncontrollable light clears the heart, pure love holds a man...changing his personality relentlessly. a 10.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 September 2008

The glance of death.........when your in deep love, is what they used to call......nice work bro.

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Chelsea Brink 25 September 2008

Very Nice. The poem hints at fraility, perhaps man's nature in such a state: love?

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Samantha Williams 25 September 2008

Very nice! ! This poem is wonderful! ! please continue to inform me when you write more.... I love your writings! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Thad Wilk 25 September 2008

Ah, She'll be back with her special glance, to give you another chance - at this romance! Great read Shiraz! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 October 2008

A beautiful poem, last stanza is nice.

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Mencita Monoï Angel Carmen 08 October 2008

a bautiful glance....

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Jessica Rosalie Smith 04 October 2008

i love the lines 'the love's death cast blight on my all' it speaks volumes about the impact of lost love good job =)

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Vilma Xelin 30 September 2008

very sublime.... I love it!

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Viola Grey 28 September 2008

it's amazing how bright the light when seen through desire's eyes...lovely write

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