Your Growth! ! ! Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Your Growth! ! !

Rating: 5.0


I asked you to endorse my love
By holding my hands
And not by chaining my soul

I wanted to show you that love
Is not slavery of mind and body
But is the security and assurance

I longed to teach you that kisses aren’t
Contracts to fulfil
But is a desire to enjoy

Finally, you learned that even the sunshine
Burns if you get too much
And soul needed decoration by heart.

In my teaching and your learning
I see you grow by the grace of an adult
And not the grief of a child.

Saturday, November 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: learning,life,love and life,wisdom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2015

Life is filled with love. Showing love from inner heart is very interesting definitely. Very nicely penned...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 November 2016

Security! ! Thanks for sharing.

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T Rajan Evol 10 February 2016

Thoughtful poem........................10

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M Asim Nehal 20 September 2018

Thanks Much Mr. Evol

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Darren Jkoeryo 15 November 2015

Indeed a brilliant poem, endorsement of love by holding hand and then teaching about kisses, neatly built very crafty poem Asim, Thanks for sharing it. You made my day.

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M Asim Nehal 20 September 2018

Thanks Much Darren J .

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Souren Mondal 14 November 2015

Yes, wisdom is something that takes us beyond sulking and towards a better life of acceptance and letting go.. Thank you for sharing Asim..

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Loke Kok Yee 14 November 2015

your lesson is well written thanks-10

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