Your Kiss Poem by Amanda Bristow

Your Kiss

Rating: 5.0


I can feel your magical touch,
when you kiss me,
I can feel your kiss,
With every bliss,

When you kissed me that afternoon,
I knew you were the one,
Your kiss, made everything right,
Although it scared me a tone,

Your kiss, swept me away,
Like a big powerful wave,
Your kiss, made my day,
I could feel you in every way,

Your kiss, was longed for,
It made me nervous,
Your kiss, lingered within,
It moved me,

Your kiss, remained in my thoughts,
Leaving me wanting more,
Your kiss, consumed me,
In one single moment.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Amanda>>>Nice work, here, indeed...Mellifluous stanzaec movement///smooth & tight...Good storyline...Solid Crafting. ~ F.j.R. ~

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Aldo Kraas 02 April 2007

This poem is excelent

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Castellenas John 18 March 2019

Perfect description for the kiss. A amazing poem.

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Doran Ellis 03 June 2017

wow, well thought out poem and beautiful

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Rishikesh Prajapati 29 January 2017

A very nice piece of writing

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Jovahna Davis 03 June 2009

i can relate to what u say really touch me

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Ben Gieske 05 April 2007

'Although it scared me a tone' - quite original

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