Your Love Poem by Patrick Millett

Your Love

Rating: 5.0


Like the wind through the trees,
You move me with ease,
Forever I follow,
Forever I sway,
Your love is what keeps my heart at bay

Like the sands of time,
You flow constantly,
Forever in my mind,
Forever in my soul,
Your love is what keeps my life from being cold

Like the ghosts of the sea,
You are always with me,
Forever around,
Forever here,
Your love is what keeps me from tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 27 November 2014

A well articulated love poem subtly penned to capture the bliss of love in the heart of hearts. The employment of similes is quite appropriate and helped to drive home the conviction of the poet's love. A nice piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Romeo Della Valle 10 September 2011

Wow! Amazing! Patrick. This beautiful and heart touching poem shows clearly your great feelings and talent and indeed, becoming your stepping stone into the Poetry World! I love its simplicity and flow! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more of your great thought provoking writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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