Your Memories Poem by Sahar Sahar

Your Memories

Rating: 4.8


When the slow day,
awakening me,
from memories of you,
that haunt me,
In my day dreams,
I feel your presence,
in my shadows,
like your soul,
coming down,
from the clouds,
and sliding from my side,
like flavours of,
ripening fruits of love,
i feel the life, glowing,
before my eyes,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 06 October 2009

what a beautiful love poem. well composed. see some of my poems too. take care

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Catrina Heart 07 October 2009

well expressed thoughts and feelings...loved it!

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soft thoughts, warm images nicely penned.....

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soft thoughts, warm images nicely penned.....

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soft thoughts, warm images nicely penned.....

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Afzal Shauq 03 July 2010

so romantic and soul kissing poem with rich and meaningful idea with... very much melodic way of expression.. loved it

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Hari Khabrani 26 April 2010

In Love it happens, as if.....

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 January 2010

feel your presence, in my shadows, like your soul, coming down, from the clouds, ....................... heart ruffles by memorabilia shadow by reality yet haunts deep cloud deciphers gleams of love soul when sieves by the glory, most passionate by art of love as when curved over the rune of reminiscence, ingeniously wrought by imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Akram Saqib 21 October 2009

lovely poem with lot of feelings

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Ejaz Khan 20 October 2009

It seems you have collected sweet memories, a great thing, now these awesome memories are entertaining you is even greater and so is this write, a beautiful, soft write! 10 without any hesitation.

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Sahar Sahar

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