Your New Message Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Your New Message



It was midnight once
You left this place
Left me behind forever
Never to feel happy and recover

We were happy couple
Faced same struggle
Pulled through critical times
But failed at nick of times

I was always in smile
He carried me everywhere in his style
I was never touching ground
The happiness was always found

I have always felt
And smelt
Your fragrance
In presence and absence

I shall carry your message
With my falling age
I have still hopes left
In body with no shift

Tuesday, December 2, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2017

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2014

It was midnight once You left this place

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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