ramesh rai

Gold Star - 13,366 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Your Pain - Poem by ramesh rai

Your pain is much more
than the pain on the cross
because you hug pains of all
to make all free from pain

You are the Saviour
compassion of whom
are flowing throughout cosmos
pacifying the creation

Bleeding from your body
dripping down the cross
making the creation crimson red
to accompolish vigour of lives

So dawn and dusk are crimson red
for hugging pains of all lives


Comments about Your Pain by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 22,532 Points Valsa George (10/13/2013 8:34:00 AM)

    This poem is indeed striking with the central image of Christ on the cross bearing on Himself the entire load of man's pain! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,166 Points Hazel Durham (9/13/2013 7:29:00 AM)

    The compassion and love of christ hold's all our pain to give us freedom to always love!
    Superb write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,953 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/8/2013 7:18:00 AM)

    you hug pains of all
    to make all free from pain
    Beautiful words delivered. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Shraddha The Poetess (9/7/2013 10:31:00 PM)

    a vry nice creation sir....... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 9, 2013


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