Your Poetry Poem by David Taylor

Your Poetry

Rating: 4.9


Your Poetry is like an ocean in my mind,
bridging the continents of our souls,
with a most natural divide,
of waters made of sacrificial rains
and the great rivers of our lives journeys.
And as I float upon the waves of your words,
I am transported from land to land,
through tempestuous winds of passion and then
a gentle breeze of your thoughts at hand.
And as I travel this ocean of your dreams
with diverse enjoyments and devilish themes,
I happen upon your love uncovered
which sends me diving deep,
into that darkest stillness,
beneath the waves of your poetic works,
and I rest in your heart,
and I remember.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
JoAnn McGrath 20 March 2007

Poems are such a great resting place especially yours

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Declan McHenry 12 March 2007

A touching tribute of a piece David. Neat.

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Arielle Perkins 12 March 2007

Love youre poem., ., I really enjoyed it., ., ., Ill make sure to git it a 10

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Trade Martin 12 March 2007

Very nicely written David...., I enjoyed it...., but truthfully, I totally realize you could never say any the above inspirational phrases about most of my ridiculous stuff.....! ! ! If you did, your beautiful poem would have to begin reading something like this, 'Your poetry is like a mudslide in my mind'. etc., etc. LOL Keep up the great work....! ! ! Best, T.M..

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poetry lover 12 March 2007

I love this one very nicely written I gave you a ten on this one.

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