(your) Rag Doll... Poem by Sad Truth

(your) Rag Doll...

Rating: 3.1


Do you play with ALL your toys like this?
A rag doll I was to you!
You would sew me,
Throw me,
Poke me,
And choke me!

Torn and tattered,
You left me.
In a corner,
There to rote.
I never really forgot!
You could of cared for me.
Like a real baby.
Wrapped me up,
Put me in a cot.

But no.
It was no fun that way.
Feelings, You said I didn't have.
But you were wrong!
I felt EVERY bit of the pain!
And now I'm too broken,
To keep playing your game!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
<font color=black>Nagourta 03 November 2008

What do you mean? ! ?

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Love Iz Lost 30 October 2008

I Like The Use Of Words In This Poem Good Job

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C T Heart 20 October 2008

A hearthfelt piece that is full of anger and sadness...penned well. Great....a 10.

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