Your Rays Poem by ramesh rai

Your Rays

Rating: 4.5


You are the diamond
mined from eternal depth of evolution
your rays are so vibrant
that can scratch the stars
that can dispel all obscurity
your rays are not to be diminished
why not broken into zillion pieces
if broken into pieces
stars will blush upon
their existence and pride.

Tuesday, October 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: humour
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tribhawan Kaul 15 October 2014

Beautifully written poem. Enjoyed the way you have expressed your inspiration. Lovely.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 October 2014

Love that keeps depth a lovely powerful poem strong poem..

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Amitava Sur 16 October 2014

The supremacy and the authority is expressed here so firmly and gallantly ! !

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Hazel Durham 16 October 2014

Rays of sunshine and happiness so beautifully expressed with panache!

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 October 2014

Beautiful lines..... if broken into pieces stars will blush upon their existence and pride. Very true said...Loved reading it.

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 15 October 2014

well written....especially the lat line, that is th eternal truth....and what 's more.... the source of inspiration...

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