Freespirit Juneja

Rookie - 3 Points (09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

Your Smile, The Vivid Constellation Of My Cosmos - Poem by Freespirit Juneja

Sitting on the river's shore
Mesmerized by its beutiful Lure
Ornated by blossoming flowers
Summon the avians from far n far
Just like your smile
Which When I come across
Enchants me in its divine gloss
As it forms the vivid constellation of my cosmos

Clouds dance across the sun
Fuel themselves to have fun
Flowerbuds crown from their niche
Enjoying nature's eternal bliss
Just like your Smile
Which forms when your lips applause
And My despairs reach eternal pause
Because it's a vivid constellation of my cosmos

Leaves dangle on the trees
Dancing to the zephyr's keys
Butterflies leap from flower to flower
Carry colors far n far
Just like your smile
When it appears
Love embraces me
And fears disappear
Heart gambols as it widens across
Because it forms the vivid constellation of my cosmos

Staring into the cerulean sky
Feel like making a gigantic cry
Are you left with anyone mr sky
To give a dying try or bid goodbye
No matter whomsoever you compile
You can't outshine my love's smile
Sorry Mr. sky for ur dreaded loss
But my love's smile, only forms the constellation of my cosmos

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is about a guy / girl who has fallen in love......
the person is relishing the feeling of being in love....
It highlights that the person who is in a beautiful place on the earth is comparing his/her love's smile to all the natural and beautiful things around him....
His / her love's smile(happiness) is supreme and nothing in the world can match it

Comments about Your Smile, The Vivid Constellation Of My Cosmos by Freespirit Juneja

  • S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/6/2012 12:38:00 AM)

    Aha a splendid sparkling poem on d beauty of smile. (Report) Reply

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  • Lizzie O'neill (5/9/2012 1:26:00 PM)

    This is written beautifully and seems to be straight from the heart truly amazing (Report) Reply

  • (4/30/2012 10:11:00 PM)

    Its amazing...I love it completely (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (4/24/2012 11:02:00 AM)

    Maybe when you wrote this you was in love very hard, as the love in writing and lines are really good to read again and again...why i like this poem..because you have something i like there...constellation and match my's magical to us to see now u use for your nice poem..that really work! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Micmac Mccrory (4/24/2012 9:46:00 AM)

    well written beautifl words (Report) Reply

  • Louis Cecile (4/24/2012 3:20:00 AM)

    A well formed poem that flows well and has a good use of language. This is probably your most confident write yet. Good work. (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2012 6:08:00 PM)

    Absolutely wonderful! I like that it isn't angsty but it isn't old, you know? It is gorgeous! Your use of words is awesome! (Report) Reply

  • Christina Weinke (4/23/2012 5:19:00 PM)

    its very touching and brings more feeling when you use nature i love it (Report) Reply

  • Samantha Cook (4/23/2012 7:30:00 AM)

    I loved it your writing is very heartfelt. (Report) Reply

  • Jinal Oswal (4/23/2012 7:06:00 AM)

    That's so sweet.... I loved this poem from the title.. all the lines in fact all the words are heartfelt... I loved the last verse.. Wow! ! You can't outshine my love's smile... thats a beautiful, lovely poem indeed... I loved it... Keep ua spirits high :) (Report) Reply

  • Wabi Sabi (4/23/2012 7:06:00 AM)

    that was romantic!
    reading this, I feel surrounded by cosmos and nestling
    (Report) Reply

  • Joshua Zwane (4/23/2012 12:23:00 AM)

    I personaly felt desire to read this poem, because of its title.I think you should consider and labour in your titles as much as you do in the contant of your poems, after all that's where it all your work, will keep reading! (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2012 10:28:00 PM)

    It leaves a very beautiful feeling (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2012 4:50:00 PM)

    This is an absolutely beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Aria Quimby (4/22/2012 3:51:00 PM)

    That was a truly beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Lizzie O'neill (4/19/2012 12:30:00 PM)

    This is a wonderful poem, so far the poems i have read tell me you are a magnificent poet (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (4/18/2012 9:01:00 AM)

    You are the brightest star of the constellation! Spontaneous flow. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (4/18/2012 6:53:00 AM)

    A lovely poem - the only chanage I would make Sharad, would be to use the word `adorned` rather than `ornated` `in the third line of your first verse. (Report) Reply

  • Samra Haq (4/8/2012 4:50:00 PM)

    your poems are very different from other poets. I am impressed from your expressions and impressions. I have read your 3 poems while reading I was thinking in my mind that I am there and every thing is going on in front of me. Wording you are using in your poems is amazing. I am your big fan. Pls add me as a friend. Keep it up.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 10, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 2, 2013

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