Your Smile, The Vivid Constellation Of My Cosmos Poem by Freespirit Juneja

Your Smile, The Vivid Constellation Of My Cosmos

Rating: 3.6


Sitting on the river's shore
Mesmerized by its beutiful Lure
Ornated by blossoming flowers
Summon the avians from far n far
Just like your smile
Which When I come across
Enchants me in its divine gloss
As it forms the vivid constellation of my cosmos

Clouds dance across the sun
Fuel themselves to have fun
Flowerbuds crown from their niche
Enjoying nature's eternal bliss
Just like your Smile
Which forms when your lips applause
And My despairs reach eternal pause
Because it's a vivid constellation of my cosmos

Leaves dangle on the trees
Dancing to the zephyr's keys
Butterflies leap from flower to flower
Carry colors far n far
Just like your smile
When it appears
Love embraces me
And fears disappear
Heart gambols as it widens across
Because it forms the vivid constellation of my cosmos

Staring into the cerulean sky
Feel like making a gigantic cry
Are you left with anyone mr sky
To give a dying try or bid goodbye
No matter whomsoever you compile
You can't outshine my love's smile
Sorry Mr. sky for ur dreaded loss
But my love's smile, only forms the constellation of my cosmos

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is about a guy / girl who has fallen in love......
the person is relishing the feeling of being in love....
It highlights that the person who is in a beautiful place on the earth is comparing his/her love's smile to all the natural and beautiful things around him....
His / her love's smile(happiness) is supreme and nothing in the world can match it
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 18 April 2012

A lovely poem - the only chanage I would make Sharad, would be to use the word `adorned` rather than `ornated` `in the third line of your first verse.

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Neela Nath Das 18 April 2012

You are the brightest star of the constellation! Spontaneous flow.

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Lizzie O'neill 19 April 2012

This is a wonderful poem, so far the poems i have read tell me you are a magnificent poet

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Aria Quimby 22 April 2012

That was a truly beautiful poem

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Sabrina Mcintyre 22 April 2012

This is an absolutely beautiful poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 November 2012

Aha a splendid sparkling poem on d beauty of smile.

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Ankita Verma 06 June 2012

REALY NICE AND HEART TOUCHI

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Lizzie O'neill 09 May 2012

This is written beautifully and seems to be straight from the heart truly amazing

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Brittney Miller 30 April 2012

Its amazing...I love it completely

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Unwritten Soul 24 April 2012

Maybe when you wrote this you was in love very hard, as the love in writing and lines are really good to read again and again...why i like this poem..because you have something i like there...constellation and cosmos...it match my soul..it's magical to us to see now u use for your nice poem..that really work! _Unwritten Soul

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Freespirit Juneja

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