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Your Tender Touch
your tender touch
reaches this very soul
thirsting and burning
the desire to be with you
and just to be with you
even in my wildest dream
your tender touch
melt my heart and piercing
the very core in me, leaving me
crazy, and so madly in love with you
gazing into your eyes
your hands softly caressing
this body, swaying and swaying
as we gently move into one direction
breaking the silence and stillness of the night
just hold me and caress me
your tender touch melting me again
the fire of our love will always be burning
our one in a million dreams we shared
engulfing in our embrace so sweet..so gentle
Meggie Gultiano
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Tuesday, January 06, 2009 |
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Saturday, February 28, 2009 |
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Comments about this poem (Your Tender Touch
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Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (5/17/2009 3:37:00 AM)
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Am I glad I came to your very last poem and found this treasure trove of love. Meggie it blows my mind, mesmerizes my heart with gold and soars my spirit with a billion silver stars! This is love
so real and so precious and passionate and tender. This is love! Do you notice how the lines span out as it reads down the page? I do and so does God! 10 Karin Anderson
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Carl Harris (5/4/2009 10:07:00 AM)
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This is a very beautifully written and expressed love poem, Meggie, and love shines from nearly every line in this very appealing and lovely write. Your lover is a very fortunate man to have a wonderful woman like you to love him. Carl.
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Frank James Ryan, Jr. (1/18/2009 2:34:00 PM)
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Wooooooooooooooooosh! ....Hark...i do think i hear the sizzling of flames...the popping of flying embers...and sirens from large trucks with red lights closing in on my smoldering P.C. wires! ! ! ! Hot Stuff, divine Ms. M! .. Tastefully sensuous!
F j R
2009
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Naidz Ladia (1/18/2009 2:19:00 PM)
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YOUR TENDER TOUCH s full of love, , ..lines r written n a very good chosen wrds, , ...nice on friendship..
naizz
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Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (1/11/2009 4:51:00 AM)
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This is such a yearning, gentle and yet passionate poem. I loved how you used the words 'swaying
swaying' as I felt I was swaying with you. Just beautiful! Karin Anderson
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Ken E Hall (1/7/2009 6:48:00 PM)
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Luvli poem on luv the core of our being which you wrote so elequently a 10 for me for your tender touch with words
kind regards
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Maia Padua (1/7/2009 1:09:00 AM)
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another passionate poem....from a heart full of dreams.....full of love...
with mind full of wonderful/amazing words....you're witty in mind...surely very witty in person....creating poems not just for the sake of writing but for the sake of your love on poetry.......always 10++++++++ for you....
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Lynda Robson (1/6/2009 6:24:00 AM)
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Passionate write Meggie, love is in the air,
10
Lynda xx
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C T Heart (1/6/2009 5:50:00 AM)
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passionately done, you have outlined your love and yearning so emotionaly...Thanks for the wonderful read.
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