Herbert Guitang

Your Touch (Unfinished) - Poem by Herbert Guitang

Your touch is so deep
A gentle hurt when you pass through
Holding very tight when it sink in
It tastes so sweet in giving and taking vibrantly

Like a facade of a cave with mild droplets
Careful digs on a grassy and marshy flower
Like a bee that sips the inner core of a pollen
Smooth flowing on a center tip at the triangle mirror

Comments about Your Touch (Unfinished) by Herbert Guitang

  • Rookie - 30 Points Henry Garcia (5/8/2015 11:24:00 PM)

    Wow! ! ! Wonderful and superb (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 197 Points Kirti Sharma (6/16/2014 3:44:00 PM)

    Nice poem! !
    I like it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Helena Zen (5/6/2014 10:53:00 AM)

    ....Greatly done... Thumbs UP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points Anne Mayz (5/5/2014 9:25:00 AM)

    ...a wonderful and unique write. Nicely done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mae Navales (5/4/2014 6:43:00 AM)

    WOW..8 lines with full of romance and passion. I am dearly love and like this poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vilma Gomez (5/4/2014 4:40:00 AM)

    a poem with sensitivity and intelligence. I love the wordings. GREAT (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,689 Points * Sunprincess * (5/2/2014 9:52:00 PM)

    ......love this line
    ~Like a bee that sips the inner core of a pollen~
    .....bees are wonderful creatures providing us with honey..
    .............and pollinating our flowers, fruits and vegetables
    ...........truly a great write... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 1, 2014

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