Your Toxic Words Poem by vijay menon

Your Toxic Words

Rating: 5.0


THE TOXIC WORDS THAT YOU VENT
WHEN YOU FUME
BURNS OUT ALL THE WORDS
THAT COMES OUT OF MY THOUGHT
BURNING DESIRES GET CRUNCHED
I FEEL I AM GETTING PUNCHED
FROM ALL SIDES BY YOUR EGO

PLEASE DROP THE THOUGHT
TO DISTANCE ME FROM YOU
THE CLOSER I GET THE COSIER I FEEL


I NEED YOUR HELP
TO PULL MYSELF BACK
RESURRECT MYSELF AND LOAD
MY EMOTIONS
WITH FANCY IDEAS
THAT I WOULD LIKE
ONE DAY TO SHARE WITH YOU

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

NEED YOUR HELP TO PULL MYSELF BACK RESURRECT MYSELF AND LOAD MY EMOTIONS WITH FANCY IDEAS THAT I WOULD LIKE ONE DAY TO SHARE WITH YOU... yes different perception to share with and accept the fancy ideas.. nice to read and share with...10 read mine.. a burning desire

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Sandra Martyres 27 April 2009

Nice one Vijay....toxic words get one nowhere....I agree with Lago Lago, the impact of the poem is diluted with the use of large caps.....

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rago rago 27 April 2009

who is the luckiest vijay? whom do you want to talk.......A Good write. If it is (small words-font) it is more good.

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