Treasure Island

Geetha Jayakumar

(Kerala Palakkad)

Your Verses and My Comments! ! !


Beautiful verses of yours
Were very pleasant to read
With wonderful message.
Love, pain and mystery
Made it a perfect
combination.
Each sincere words
poured out from your heart
Made it stupendous.

What more interesting was
You left the readers
To think on its way
So free were your verses
Loved the way..

What most beautiful Was
The rhythmic flow
Made it melancholic.

Concluded with a twist In it
Made the readers
To read it once more.

What should I comment
On this beautiful flow of words...
Let nothing obstruct
The flow of your pen.
The indepth message in it
Made it worth reading.
Your poem speaks
A lot to us
Made it worthwhile
Reading it.

May your poem win the heart of many
And flow along with your
Journey of poems! ! !

Sumi Nair

Submitted: Wednesday, October 09,2013
Edited: Tuesday, November 05,2013

Submitted: Friday, December 13, 2013
Edited: Friday, December 13, 2013

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Hindi version: Aapke Padya Aur meri Tippani! ! !

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