Your Waters Poem by Crimson Love

Your Waters

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</>My heart beats for the ones always out of reach,
Falling into this love, I'm now knee deep,
Slowly sinking into the waters, which you call love,
I only feel asphyxiation as this love pushes its way down my throat,

You wish to kill who I am, so you can have the me you want,
But the me you want, isn't who I shall be,
Fall away from me, your liquid love, shant taint me,
Never shall I get so close to these waters again,
treacherous they are...distorting love,
making wills bend,
Let me drowned in suffering,
I need not suffocate in your waters.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kara Towe 11 January 2012

Awesome, more people should feel this way. Really great you have the courage to get away from someones' suffocating will. Good for you to have such wisdom! Thanks for sharing :)

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izzy Barnwell 23 December 2011

This poem is very good and really true..that's the sad part. It's kinda like my poem, Your Kiss Burns

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Lenore Lee 30 October 2011

Such a strong poem. I too have felt sufficated as I love those too far away for me to be with.

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Jacqui Broad 29 October 2011

This is very emotional... Can the water also be tears cried out of disappointment? Lines 5 & 6, you wrote brilliant!

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