</>My heart beats for the ones always out of reach,
Falling into this love, I'm now knee deep,
Slowly sinking into the waters, which you call love,
I only feel asphyxiation as this love pushes its way down my throat,
You wish to kill who I am, so you can have the me you want,
But the me you want, isn't who I shall be,
Fall away from me, your liquid love, shant taint me,
Never shall I get so close to these waters again,
treacherous they are...distorting love,
making wills bend,
Let me drowned in suffering,
I need not suffocate in your waters.
This poem is very good and really true..that's the sad part. It's kinda like my poem, Your Kiss Burns
Such a strong poem. I too have felt sufficated as I love those too far away for me to be with.
This is very emotional... Can the water also be tears cried out of disappointment? Lines 5 & 6, you wrote brilliant!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Awesome, more people should feel this way. Really great you have the courage to get away from someones' suffocating will. Good for you to have such wisdom! Thanks for sharing :)