Oscar Mork

Rookie (Norway)

Zapien - Poem by Oscar Mork

The light went dim in the street of hate
Another night falls It`s your fate
Stage is set, come see the show
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Comments about Zapien by Oscar Mork

  • Lissa P (4/1/2008 8:38:00 PM)

    ummmmm....Thats all I can say
    its very morbid
    but awesome for that
    and the way inwhoch you wrote it is kool to
    but killour children...hmmm great idea lol
    but really I love the morbidity in this (Report) Reply

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  • Ariel Morris (3/8/2008 6:27:00 PM)

    you poem was very inspiring. Check out some of my poems. Poet- Ariel morris (Report) Reply

  • Shaynna Bernal (1/23/2008 2:45:00 PM)

    hay i just wanted to comment on your poem, i really like it. your style of writing is awsome and you inspired me to write more. i'm not sure if you wrote this because of something that your going through of its just your style but its really good. (Report) Reply

  • Alisha Lonz (1/21/2008 11:11:00 AM)

    this is a beautifully written poem, not something one can easily find... i deeply enjoyed this, it reminds me of my own writing (Report) Reply

  • Crystal Corchado (10/14/2007 11:01:00 AM)

    Very deep and dark it was beautifuly written keep posting I loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Emily Martinez (6/5/2007 5:47:00 PM)

    This poem is deep
    very discriptive
    i love it (Report) Reply

  • Poetry Hound (7/16/2005 6:25:00 AM)

    Reads like a lyric not a poem. Not very original or creative. Sorry. (Report) Reply








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