I have enjoyed reading your poetry. You have a love of creative English. When I first started to write, so many years ago, I was lucky enough to be given very good advice. It isn't enough just to have inspiration: you need to work hard at learning the actual craft of writing poetry.. to introduce your own 'music' to it.So I studied the forms and structures of different poets, so that I could 'paint my pictures' better. I think that, at present, you are putting down your thoughts like shopping lists. You obviously have so much more to give if you work hard at tying your lines together in a creative way. I predict that you will discover deeper satisfaction for yourself.. and to others... if only you will let yourself be more free.
Very best wishes Peter
Voyage Of a Bird
Oh Swallow high you fly Shielding the sun with thy glory Hovering over the mountain summits In the stillness of night Making the souls awake in darkness And asleep in light Grand is your grace Freezing the flowers of the spring In the midst of winter dreams