I have enjoyed reading your poetry. You have a love of creative English. When I first started to write, so many years ago, I was lucky enough to be given very good advice. It isn't enough just to have inspiration: you need to work hard at learning the actual craft of writing poetry.. to introduce your own 'music' to it.So I studied the forms and structures of different poets, so that I could 'paint my pictures' better. I think that, at present, you are putting down your thoughts like shopping lists. You obviously have so much more to give if you work hard at tying your lines together in a creative way. I predict that you will discover deeper satisfaction for yourself.. and to others... if only you will let yourself be more free.
Very best wishes Peter
An egg is hatched The fledgling crawls out of its shell Unable to see and unable to fly Limps around in pitch black darkness
Mother bird feeds it with fondness Not only food but also love Lots of sunrises and sunsets Accrues into days of inaction