Plath´s poems are so dense to me... maybe because I´m her namesake and might sometimes carry similar feelings of sadness and desperation...Well, as to your poems, they´re excellent! Congrats from Brazil,
Yours in Poetry,
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Under a dripping grey sky Sad, soaking, shivering and wet I wanted to know why Why and why and why On that rainy day when you said goodbye On that sodden day you went away I had to walk on, forlorn.