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Ravi Sathasivam


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  • , , , (12/1/2004 12:16:00 AM)

    Ravi,

    Your work reflects a sincere beauty that often is lacking in a lewd world.

    I congratulate you for your intensity and integrity.

    Your work is sweet and humbling and I thank you kind sir.

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  • Ravi Sathasivam (10/22/2004 1:10:00 AM)

    Hi Maria,

    Well, you are not cynical.
    I always appreciate comment from people like you.
    Yes, I am your new friend. (ravisathasivam2002@yahoo.com)
    God bless you
    Ravi

  • Ravi Sathasivam (10/21/2004 12:54:00 AM)

    Dear Maria,

    Thanks again for your comment. I do really appreciate. You may be correct with your words but every one has their own way to express their own thoughts. I have freedom from my pen and mind that’s creates what I feel is right. I don’t know about your work
    And it is honest or not but as a writer I will respect your pen. My work may be seems
    ‘Kinda gushy’ as you have said but I am sure that I have written with acceptable decent language. I don’t say that you are insulting me. You have your right to comment anything you want. Some time it could help a writer to improve his work. I do understand
    That way too. And at the same time I thank you for taking interest & care on my work.
    May God be with you
    Ravi

  • Ravi Sathasivam (10/20/2004 7:28:00 AM)

    Madam Maria Davids,

    For your information, I am not an Indian.
    I am come from Sri Lanka and my country is very clean in all repects.
    Your comments are very welcome but think well before what you write.
    Thanks
    Ravi

  • David Keig (10/18/2004 4:50:00 AM)

    ravi

    much as i admire productivity and creativity i think you may be over-doing the number of poems you are posting!

    there is not enough time in the day to give any one of them justice because there are so many of them

    david

Forgive Me My Love......

I know I fought with you without any reason
forgive me my love
I know I used bitter words for you
forgive me my love
I know I hurted your feelings even you were innocent
forgive me my love
I know I abused you though you were right
forgive me my love
I know I didn't believe you as my partner

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