Just checked out your work again. I am fishing for something new.You amplify my lack of talent. I dig your style, look forward to reading your poems in the future. I want to invent a drink and name it after you, too bad pink squirrel is already taken.
I know I’ve commented here before, but I need to again:
Many of your poems have humor, some the blunt truth,
In the case of Christine, amazing fragile beauty! Always
Continue to express your vision, Jake!
a. jacob, Thanks for the advice on my poem, I've made a change in the verse you suggested and I believe it works well. I like the way you use rhyme particulary in 'The Rejection Slip'. I see you are from Philadelphia...I grew up there and still work in the city. Thanks again for the advice and keep on producing poetry.
Wow! Such an imagination. I enjoyed almost everything of yours in this site. It's left me craving for more. I'm espescially impressed with Burelesque Haiku, Big Easy, and Fingerprints. Theyu're my favorite. Write on, Jake!
i have made a mistake i have made several mistakes they all started when i left you and i have tried in vain to kill the pain but the pain is killing me can't go back and change the past must move forward barrel on thru