wow, you're amazing! for a ten year old, you have a great gift for words, even some of my classmates can't write the way you do...you really should consider a career in writing, you certainly have the skill and talent to do it...keep writing, i'm sure many readers appreciate and love your work...
Hey Risha, I must say you are a fine young poet. Any one your age could write short verses about their life, but I dare say none with maturity and style like yours. I enjoy how your verses don't exactly conform to rigid sets, but yet remain very readable and uniform with simple language and good rhyming. Keep writing! Talents like yours should be shared with the world =)
You know Dinesh, I must respectfully disagree there, at her tender age I think it much more important to keep writing on whatever inspires her. A true poet of intelligence will develop a wider range as their experience of life expands and this is quite natural. This is the season of childlike wonder and humour, the angst of the teenager yet to be.
With much appreciation to you Risha.
Very young.. but how talented! Risha Ahmed is sure to become a queen of poets if consistent excellence is retained at this rate.I hope she will soon write a few poems on themes a little far from those very personal and around her.It is necessary for expressing herself as one who sails with the changing times...
If you really are 10 years old, you deserve a lot of praise for the effort you put in because it is way more than the effort a lot of adults put in on Poemhunter. I wish you the best in your writing. Always remember to follow your own writing path and follow instinct. I read a few of your poems today and I enjoyed the carefree nature relayed within. I am sure your parents must be proud of your writing. Good luck.
Risha Ahmed... You are without doubt a talented little lady indeed... i have taken my time and read all your poems, from start to finish... and for a nine year old, well you are amazing... Risha... Your family must be rightly proud of such a little angel... may you spend all your life, writing such great poetry Risha... andrew
What do you have to say On this day In the month of April and May Everybody is gay This is the summer time When people go to the beaches They have juice made of lime And fruits like mangoes and peaches Many people like to stay indoors