Rising Morning Star

Rising Morning Star Poems

(Darkness)

Let me see you suffer, Let me break you down,
Let me lift you up, to slam you to the ground,
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No reflection in the mirror, this person has no face, No reflection in the mirror just an empty space. This person never was, and can never be, for they don't know who they are, themselves they can not see...

No reflection in the mirror just another empty place, No reflection in the mirror, the image is missing... gone without a trace. Hidden is their name, their eyes they can not see, hidden is the map of what they were meant to be.
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A Warrior of flame, fulfilling destiny's name...
Bravery and strength, the determination to press
on, scars from all the battles, that have came and gone.
Faithful and unbreakable to all, this undefeated warrior
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If you are but a dream, then let me sleep forever, for my wish is only for us to be together. If your touch is but wind, I long for that gentle breeze, that warms my heart and puts my mind at ease.

If your kiss is but rain, then let it pour down on me, from the storm clouds of your love for always and eternity. If your gaze is but moon beams let them shine on my forever, for there's a longing in my soul for us to be together.
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Pure, rare, attractive, breathe taking, complex, simple, beautiful, genuine... all these are words that describe you, mysterious, strong, warm, free, understanding, stubborn, all these are words that describe... who?

A truly beautiful creation, an electrifying sensation, that no words can truly match. Beauty is your voice, as the vibrations roll up from your throat and flow softly from your lips, and oh how lovely that sound... so simple yet so profound.
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My lips drink from a cup that was not mine, how sweet, how decedent, how delicious, how divine. This sweet intoxicating blend, that came from the cup that leaves a stinging longing on my lips,

My eternal addiction, confines me from one sip. Yet somehow, somehow I knew that this way mine, that it's contents and those of my heart are somehow entwined, how foolish of me to claim, to even desire what seems will forever be another's...
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With braveness of heart oh so boldly do I say, my eyes locked on this love they do not go astray, yet not one word did my lips ever speak... just a gaze into his eyes with my hand upon his cheek.

Flowing from my soul like a gentle wind into his ear, pronouncing every word and every one he does hear, yet not one word did my lips ever speak... I just look into his loving eyes, into his soul I seek.
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In a moment was no longer half I was whole, because someone spoke to my heart my inner spirit, my soul. There is no greater love... than the love I have for him inside my heart and once we're united we'll be together always and we, shall never part.

I can hardly breathe... for he has captured my love and set my spirit free with wings of a dove. I picture his voice it entrances me deeply for him I've fallen head over heels, I've fallen so steeply.
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The pain comes up and here we go, it's time for another over dose don't think I'm an addict yet, though my friends say I'm getting close. Open the bottle and pop the pill, will it make me feel better?

Maybe it will, now all my thoughts hook together like links in a chain mixing each and every thought and slurring my brain. Over and over with tears way too close, it's time yet again, for my daily over dose.
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I see my fearless warrior fall, from a blade he can't seem to budge at all, I rush to his aid, I fall to my knees, I place his head upon my lap, looking into his eyes I can feel his pain and I see his energy start to collapse.

As I'm holding his head in my hands, I look up at the enemy who did this, staring them straight in the eye I then scream my commands, ' Oh wicked one how dare you try to kill he, who is the love of my life, How dare you challenge me! ! '
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My ever burning fire place, I can feel the heat as is caresses my face, I can smell the sent of the sizzling lumber as it awakens my emotions from an extended slumber.

All senses awakened I can now feel your warm embrace, forever burning forever passionate my ever burning fire place. I now feel a sensation such as I have never felt, the icy cage that once held me has began to melt.
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Hurt
To hurt, to cry and not know why,
a tear for fear, you can't go near,
to ache, to break, to fall, to shake,
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He who deceives, who's not one word should you believe,
crawling through the dust he rambles, to hide the truth
he scrambles, barely making it out in shambles,
like a killer on the run. Undercover, a clear disguise,
...

Like a ghost I feel you standing here,
I get a chill when your spirits near.
When I look at you it seems you
look right through me, how can it
...

15.

You deny what you feel, you deny me...
you deny that the connection between us
is reality. If you're not denying, then you
certainly ignore, me, the way I feel,
...

This poem was co-written by myself and my good friend Steven, enjoy.

[Steven]
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To be in love with a dream is something a fool would do... now I know the meaning of too good to be true. you were never there I knew it, in lands so far apart, you were a mirage a cloud, an illusion of the heart.

I only ever had you when my eyes were shut, I now open my eyes to find everything in this rut. So this is my heart? Ha! ! ... more like cold bloody liar, you lead me to things I can never have, and say it's what I desire.
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Rising Morning Star Biography

Hello I'm Rising Morning Star, I'm from Reno Nevada. I've been writing for more than 10 years now, I like to think of my writing style as very unique and different. I'm aware of the fact that some people may view my writing style as 'Improper' this kind of thing drives them crazy and because of that fact they think that it must have been done in error. Actually it's not, it's something I mean to do and love doing honestly, because I feel that sometimes it's important to break the generic mind set of what is or has to be. I have created this profile not so much for critiquing but rather for people to enjoy, learn and to make people think outside of the normal wave of things. I also feel that what makes a good poet is not how perfect their grammar is, or how pretty they can make the wording, or how politically correct their writing is. I feel that what makes a great poet goes deeper than that, if they can make you feel, think, dream, visualize what they are talking about, or it teaches you something that is a great poet. Weather the topic is about being angry, in love, depressed, scared... You have to make people feel that, because think about it honestly, any person can write a few pretty words, but if you can't feel it you can't connect or relate to it. It takes a great poet to take you somewhere and make you feel. Think about and consider that the next time you're rating a poem. Peace abound, Rising Morning Star)

The Best Poem Of Rising Morning Star

Let Me See You Suffer (Battle With The Darkness)

(Darkness)

Let me see you suffer, Let me break you down,
Let me lift you up, to slam you to the ground,
Let me cut you with this knife, I wanna make you bleed,
Let me see you cry, I wanna hear you plead
Let me see you suffer, Let me see you drown,
I wanna drive you crazy, When no one is around...

(Me)

You'll never see me suffer, For I am way too strong,
You'll never break me down, You know that you are wrong,
I'll never hear you voice, And you will not succeed,
And in the end not I, But only you will bleed...

(Darkness)

Let me see you suffer, Let me make you Shake,
Let me be the nightmare, that keeps you awake,
Let me give you pain, agonizing to the core,
Let me steal your air, so you can't breath anymore,
Let me rule your life, Let me scare you to death,
Let me break you down, till there's nothing left...

(Me)

You can never shake me, You can never make me die,
You're just a wicked snake, entangled in a lie,
You are to weak, and hates what you speak,
You're already dead, if my death is what you seek,
With this blade I'll silence your voice, it's time for you to die,
and you don't have a choice...

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