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Comments about Sameer Ahmed
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Narender Singh Bansal
(8/5/2009 3:51:00 AM)
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Your Poem 'An Ocean Within ' in respect of your father, shows the insight of his life along with your worries about old age quite nicely.
Your narration that he still has dreams shows the lively spirit within him and the journey he has been through and will surely carry on.
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Ana Sanchez
(8/4/2009 10:16:00 PM)
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Sameer, this poem brings tears to my eyes..so well put and inspiring. its like i feel your strong gesture to ur father...he is your back bone and therefore..u needed to create something for him..I'm sure he is proud of a talented poet..Congrats my friend
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Amira Amin
(3/31/2009 6:10:00 AM)
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WAKE UP.Its a wonderful piece AMIRA
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TD Euwaite
(1/14/2009 12:45:00 PM)
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I like these new ones. You should send them to our poetry contest.
http: //www.poetsofmars.com
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An Act Of Self-defense
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In the kitchen I stood
It was in the hood
With the burning hob, may be,
I interrupted it's sleep
It guided itself down
With two bodily segments
One big, one small
Quilted with layer of cuticle
It's digited eight legs
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