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Samra Haq


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  • Margaret Kiyaga (8/21/2014 10:46:00 AM)

    Samra Haq's poems are really good!

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  • Joseph Ziegrist (3/5/2014 12:24:00 PM)

    A nice poem. It reveals the orient spirit.

  • Abdul Malik Mandani (3/5/2014 10:30:00 AM)

    I don't very much care for this poem, pardon me. But the kite is not free, the string is in someone's hand. It can fly only as far as it is let to go. A kite needs wind, string and someone to fly. The poem is kind of childish. It has no substance.

  • Anne Havell (3/5/2014 2:28:00 AM)

    Samra, your strict rhyming scheme contrasts very nicely with the image of the kite as it flows freely through the air, I liked this very much. I feel there is still a little work to be done on some of the lines as they are a little clumsy in construction but it would be worth doing this.

  • Karen I Banks (4/16/2012 11:17:00 AM)

    put life on here i want to hear it thanks

  • Phyllis T. Halle (3/5/2012 2:26:00 PM)

    Samra: I enjoyed your poem To touch the Sky.
    Not every one feels the freedom to fly and touch the sky. You express your sense of freedom and clarity of purpose.
    Sincerely, Phyllis T. Halle

Rain

Rain rain - do come again
Cause you offer much to gain
Rain rain - you sprinkle showers
You bring happiness to the flowers
Rain rain - you make the gardens nourish
You make everyone to flourish
Rain rain - you make the weather foggy
We all remain inside, including my doggy
Rain rain - you make kids to play on the path

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