Samra Haq

Rookie - 32 Points [' Hope']

Comments about Samra Haq

  • Rookie - 3 Points Margaret Kiyaga (8/21/2014 10:46:00 AM)

    Samra Haq's poems are really good!

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  • Rookie Joseph Ziegrist (3/5/2014 12:24:00 PM)

    A nice poem. It reveals the orient spirit.

  • Rookie - 122 Points Abdul Malik Mandani (3/5/2014 10:30:00 AM)

    I don't very much care for this poem, pardon me. But the kite is not free, the string is in someone's hand. It can fly only as far as it is let to go. A kite needs wind, string and someone to fly. The poem is kind of childish. It has no substance.

  • Rookie Anne Havell (3/5/2014 2:28:00 AM)

    Samra, your strict rhyming scheme contrasts very nicely with the image of the kite as it flows freely through the air, I liked this very much. I feel there is still a little work to be done on some of the lines as they are a little clumsy in construction but it would be worth doing this.

  • Rookie Karen I Banks (4/16/2012 11:17:00 AM)

    put life on here i want to hear it thanks

  • Rookie Phyllis T. Halle (3/5/2012 2:26:00 PM)

    Samra: I enjoyed your poem To touch the Sky.
    Not every one feels the freedom to fly and touch the sky. You express your sense of freedom and clarity of purpose.
    Sincerely, Phyllis T. Halle

Best Poem of Samra Haq

To Touch The Sky

I am a kite
I can go everywhere site by site
My work is to fly
To touch the sky
I am in so many colors
As you can see the sky with flying flowers
I don't want to hide
I can fly everywhere side by side
I can fly in the day light
So everyone can see me with sight
I have no sense at all
I have no fence at all
But still my work is to fly
Birds are singing a song in the sky
My work is to fly
To touch the sky

Read the full of To Touch The Sky

Rain

Rain rain - do come again
Cause you offer much to gain
Rain rain - you sprinkle showers
You bring happiness to the flowers
Rain rain - you make the gardens nourish
You make everyone to flourish
Rain rain - you make the weather foggy
We all remain inside, including my doggy
Rain rain - you make kids to play on the path

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