shiny shine

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Comments about shiny shine

  • Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive) (1/1/2010 9:06:00 PM)

    You're poems have alot of heart, but more importantly, you have alot of heart. You are probably the easiest person I've ever found to talk to, and you are soooo caring and thoughtful. You really make me feel better in my messed up world, and I will always be thankful for how much you've helped me.
    I hope you don't mind me posting this, but I felt I needed to.

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  • Stephen Feltham (7/17/2009 5:29:00 PM)

    Shiny Shine

    Great poems!
    Very profound for a young person with an amazing amount of sensivity.

    best regards
    Merlin (UK)

  • ~A Little Blue Bird~ ~A Little Blue Bird~ (5/6/2008 6:18:00 PM)

    Shiny shine is an awesome writer. Her poems will make you feel like your in a different world.(my favorite is the beach poem) They go deep.

    Keep writin Shine,

    ~The Little Blue Bird~

Beach

As I walk along the deserted beach
I feel the damp sand surronding my feet
I feel the cool relaxing breeze creep up upon me with ease
As I look out at the restless waves my thoughts unwind like restless days
The beach is a very quiet and calming place

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