shiny shine

Rookie - 5 Points (akron)

Comments about shiny shine

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive) (1/1/2010 9:06:00 PM)

    You're poems have alot of heart, but more importantly, you have alot of heart. You are probably the easiest person I've ever found to talk to, and you are soooo caring and thoughtful. You really make me feel better in my messed up world, and I will always be thankful for how much you've helped me.
    I hope you don't mind me posting this, but I felt I needed to.

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  • Rookie Stephen Feltham (7/17/2009 5:29:00 PM)

    Shiny Shine

    Great poems!
    Very profound for a young person with an amazing amount of sensivity.

    best regards
    Merlin (UK)

  • Rookie ~A Little Blue Bird~ (5/6/2008 6:18:00 PM)

    Shiny shine is an awesome writer. Her poems will make you feel like your in a different world.(my favorite is the beach poem) They go deep.

    Keep writin Shine,

    ~The Little Blue Bird~

Midnight Rider

As I wonder through the trees
I hear a softly calling breeze
Come to me, come to me, it pleas
Weakly wondering, with all my might
I stumble upon a most terrifying sight
Come to me, come to me, it pleas
Reaching out with its fingers of death
it beackons me and leaves out its breath
Trembling from head to toe suddenly I seem to know

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