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shiny shine

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  • Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive) (1/1/2010 9:06:00 PM)

    You're poems have alot of heart, but more importantly, you have alot of heart. You are probably the easiest person I've ever found to talk to, and you are soooo caring and thoughtful. You really make me feel better in my messed up world, and I will always be thankful for how much you've helped me.
    I hope you don't mind me posting this, but I felt I needed to.

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  • Stephen Feltham (7/17/2009 5:29:00 PM)

    Shiny Shine

    Great poems!
    Very profound for a young person with an amazing amount of sensivity.

    best regards
    Merlin (UK)

  • ~A Little Blue Bird~ (5/6/2008 6:18:00 PM)

    Shiny shine is an awesome writer. Her poems will make you feel like your in a different world.(my favorite is the beach poem) They go deep.

    Keep writin Shine,

    ~The Little Blue Bird~

Best Friends

We were considered by others Best Friends
“unbreakable” is what our friendship was said to be
I knew it was to good to be true
I expected it might end but not so abruptly

I trusted you with everything
We had our fun
We played our games
It was unbelievable

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