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  • Rookie - 0 Points Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive) (1/1/2010 9:06:00 PM)

    You're poems have alot of heart, but more importantly, you have alot of heart. You are probably the easiest person I've ever found to talk to, and you are soooo caring and thoughtful. You really make me feel better in my messed up world, and I will always be thankful for how much you've helped me.
    I hope you don't mind me posting this, but I felt I needed to.

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  • Rookie Stephen Feltham (7/17/2009 5:29:00 PM)

    Shiny Shine

    Great poems!
    Very profound for a young person with an amazing amount of sensivity.

    best regards
    Merlin (UK)

  • Rookie ~A Little Blue Bird~ (5/6/2008 6:18:00 PM)

    Shiny shine is an awesome writer. Her poems will make you feel like your in a different world.(my favorite is the beach poem) They go deep.

    Keep writin Shine,

    ~The Little Blue Bird~

Dungeon

As I walk through the dark and eerie dungeon
I smell the musky air
The rotting corpse lays upon the warped wooden bench
As I open the creaking door the rusted hinge screaks
I see the well oiled chains laying so proudly upon the worn down dirt in the far gloom I hear echoing screams
I walk slowly over to examine the rotting corspe and discover a damaged necklace as I took it in the distance I hear a shooting
I suddenly hit the cold bricks, and screamed in shock

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