Hello I've read all your poems and here's my opinion: you are a pretty good poet (for someone who's 12) , I like the way you evoke imagery in your poems and how they generally have fitting rhythm structures, the way you use easy to understand language is also good, however you have spelling errors in several places and you should fix those up, and also in some places using rhyme would be better (I'm not saying poems have to rhyme or anything) . Well that's my advice (not like I'm expert or anything since I'm only 16 myself) . If you have time please read my poems and tell me what you think and how I can improve. Keep writing; you are pretty good!
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-Cheng Zheng
Hello I've read all your poems and here's my opinion: you are a pretty good poet (for someone who's 12) , I like the way you evoke imagery in your poems and how they generally have fitting rhythm structures, the way you use easy to understand language is also good, however you have spelling errors in several places and you should fix those up, and also in some places using rhyme would be better (I'm not saying poems have to rhyme or anything) . Well that's my advice (not like I'm expert or anything since I'm only 16 myself) . If you have time please read my poems and tell me what you think and how I can improve. Keep writing; you are pretty good!
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-Cheng Zheng