Silverinna Annastasia

Rookie (12/09/1995 / Elizabeth)

Comments about Silverinna Annastasia

  • Rookie Beth Johnson (2/17/2012 5:52:00 AM)

    I enjoyed this, A child can bring much love and happiness.Well written, beth

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  • Rookie Beth Johnson (2/17/2012 5:48:00 AM)

    This is a ten if I knew how to vote.You brought a bit of humour with hush hush to a very serious topic.I was alarmed.beth

  • Rookie Beth Johnson (2/17/2012 5:45:00 AM)

    How strange I just wrote a poem on nightmare.Your feelings well expressed of wanting to be comforted, Well written, beth

  • Rookie Beth Johnson (2/17/2012 5:42:00 AM)

    I really enjoyed this poem.I have heartache an can relate to your emotions.I gave you 9 but it didn't work.Well rhymed.beth

Lovely Flames

Loving you always hurt me, but I could never stay away.
At first you pushed me away, but then you opened your arms to me.
It was easy, at first, because you let things sway.
But your true colours began to show and now I see.
You are the flame, and I am the moth.
Your flames were the brightest and I became your attraction.
I became your small, defenceless moth.
And I was too slow for a reaction.
I burned in your fire.

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