A Whole New World Poem by Antonio Liao

A Whole New World

Rating: 5.0


A Whole New World

flew to the horizon
of uncertainty and struggle,
hold every breath
to reach the most perfect hand
of the unknown, a water lou
of life of survival

believe drops of fate, a deep
rebirth of faith
inside the troubled heart; a weight
that some how struck
the essence of hope, nay! the surrender
of twinkling capture star

move on, the night keeps the breath,
waiting to warm your lonely heart;
it’s a new world of
true beginning, where determination
walks with reckoning
possibility and perseverance

let then every foot prints
call every beginning to
see the future ….

“beats of heart echo in a distance drum”
Ana May May Ann Gonzales

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kranthi Pothineni 12 January 2010

Very nice and positive in all aspects. Ending verses were really blended well. On a whole positiveness shines in each line of this poem to make its readers to shine in.

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Ency Bearis 12 January 2010

splendid poem.. worth reading all the way.....nice, nice.....10

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