Age Of Love Poem by Bellaina Bella Hernandez

Age Of Love

Rating: 5.0


Everyday is a new beginning
and an old death
something worth living
but not in regret

seeing you everday, is my life
when gone away, brought death
being with you, brings family strife
rather have the strife than death

Age of Love, with just you and me
where no one can come disturb
but a place only for they to see
how much you and i are in love

Age of Love, which i hope wont go just yet
unless it takes us both
when that age dies, so will we
because we are a part of Age of Love

found each other when it first began
and to stay a couple when it leaves
we are in the Age of Love
we are a part of this Age of Love

10-30-2011

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdallah Gamal 03 November 2011

Another great piece of work, I loved the metaphors used and the chosen perfectly words drew a beautiful picture for true love, than for inviting me to read and watch that amazing scene that I've imagined since I was sent to this life, perfect and magnificent :)

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Kurtis Cwiklo 02 November 2011

your poem is breath taking, it describes what i feel almost every day. i don't have any pointers because the way you write is perfect keep up the good work

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