Beneath The Surface Poem by sherrie tappenden
Beneath The Surface
I thought I saw a glimpse.
the tight knit chrysalis
in a diamond out of sight.
embryonic, still unformed.
changing ever moving,
evolving and invisible.
I slipped beneath the surface.
felt the world up in the sky.
and the pounding closed me in.
in real time.
Metamorphic, smooth and beautiful.
spiralling towards the centre
of the universe.
dormant, sleeping still
below mossy slabs
sweet and sad.
I brushed aside the cobweb.
felt the diamond in my hand
and the deep cut of reality.
In real time.
I really like the way you write Sherrie This poem is beautiful. Thanks for sharing
the thing that drew me right into this wonderful write was the amazingly tangible word usage and choice placing. very very well done! ! ! such mystery and such depth is acquired only after careful and talented effort! fabulous write an easy 10.. keep it up! !
This is a superb write, and entraps much of the mystery surronding the so-called normal - - much food for thought and beautifully executed.... thank you Sherrie. 10 from Fay..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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i love how u expressed ur feelings onto this poem.. eloquent and outstanding 100000+