Best Defense Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Best Defense



Intercept peril, early
Appraise it wisely
Attack same, promptly!

Sunday, March 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wes Vogler 12 January 2016

7..5... 5 is this allowed? I'm new at haiku I was told 5..7..5

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Walterrean Salley 09 July 2015

Good plan. Very wise.

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Thank you Salley, for your simple, but encouraging comment.

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Hiroshi Satow 18 April 2015

Sure, you are right! I often intercept peril late, appraise it fool, and never ever attack it...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 March 2015

Wonderful self defence poem on life. Really nice tiny poem shared.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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