Black Love Poem by Adryan Barnathan

Black Love

Rating: 4.5


Dominated
I've learned to
control emotions
to forget to feel
any emotion
at all
Blackmailed
so I won't go
ties me
to this situation
Imprisioned within
does not allow me to
let down barriers
so you have me
all to yourself now


Copyright ©2005

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Gerardino 27 December 2005

ADRIENNE, like the poem, i can see every word, nice job.

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Don Stratford 01 October 2005

I hope, for your sake, this wasn't from personal experience. If it was I hope it isn't now. I feel all the emotions in this work. Don S

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Max Reif 23 August 2005

This is a powerful description. Chilling and very close to home. Also very brave to speak out.

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David Zvekic 22 June 2005

I can sympathise with this poem. I know from where this comes.

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earyt etr 03 June 2005

wow... wow.This is another prime example of the Poet Adrienne Barnathan, and her Talent.I am proud to know her, and may her Well of Talents never know drought.

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