Busted Poem by Adam Day

Busted

Rating: 5.0


Busted wide open my hearts drips freely
Pain and despair I am down kneeling
Life without you will be short and stout
Long hours of drinking till my liver busts out
I cant hide my feelings holding back tears
I will dropp every dime pounding beer after beer
You cut me deep when you said he was coming
Then twisted the knife when where he would be slumbering
It hurts so bad I don’t know what to do
I fought back the tears that tried to break through
I didn’t want to be involved is what I told myself
I should have left well enough alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 14 October 2008

The reader is made to feel the pain and frustration here very well Adam. You are applealing to the heart and of course that is the aim of love - even unrequited love. well penned.

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Egi David Perdana 26 September 2008

lovely poems, great stanza welcome my pal!

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Adam Day

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whiting Indiana
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