Evidence Poem by Sathya Narayana

Evidence

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“Who is responsible for this? ”
I wanted to question Him
When I entered His realm
I found ‘guilt’ in His eyes! Yes!
He is hurrying to daub on some......
evidence! Well! Well! I could guess
On the right lower brim
Of large messy earth canvas
He is erasing…….. His name! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 07 January 2009

a subtle accusation...

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Ben Gieske 03 January 2009

He only rested after creating us and He left it up to us to finish the job which we aren't doing very well. We may just run out of time. You present a very interesting point of view.

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Joseph Poewhit 31 December 2008

An artist would never erase the name.

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Mamta Agarwal 31 December 2008

Sathyaji, what a profound statement. even God wants to remove all evidence of his name from this messy earthy canvas. all the mayhem and atrocities in his name, shame, shame...10 i guess this is how a parent feels when the grown up child behaves irresponsibly, beyond reason... Mamta

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Sathya Narayana

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Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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