Father & Son. Poem by Michael Walker

Father & Son.

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We went together to picnics at the beach
in your serviceable brown Dodge
which also took us to church on Sundays,
a drive of fifteen kilometres.

We went together to your village dairy,
where you worked seven days a week.
I served many customers to give you a break.
They came in, searching for something.


We went together on that last Friday
to the full church by the lake.
The hearse was black and final
but it was followed by many mourners.


-17 March,2017.

Thursday, March 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My father had quite a short life. He was a motor mechanic, but owned a dairy for some years. Ray built his life on the faith and the church. As a family, we all loved him.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simone Inez Harriman 03 July 2017

A lovely tribute for your father Michael. He sounds like he was a man of God and a hard working man that brought you up to be the same.

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Practicing Poetess 16 March 2017

I'd like to be the first to comment on this lovely poem! I'm new to the site, but I recognise good work when I see it!

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Michael Walker 18 March 2017

You boost my self confidence with your comment. I'm sure you will enjoy this site, but it may not be easy at first. I can't wait to read your poems.

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