Fire In My Head Poem by Midnight Lily

Fire In My Head

Rating: 5.0


My thought cloud up
Like pools of smoke
Oops I'm sorry
My mentalstability just broke
Because of the fire in my head.

With nightmares I am wishing
Were just dreams
Silence is broken by shattered screams
My floor is covered in pools of red In all this fire in my head

My pulse pounding
In my mind
Fire alarms sounding
What did they find?

Me. Curled up in a ball
Shaking in the corner of the wall.

Because of the fire in my head..

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this because i had a headache and it hurt really bad and it felt like fire in my head but this has a deeper meaning then just a headache..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A Dark Lifetime . 02 December 2012

Wow: O You are really good dear! ! You write with so strong words and so much feelings that you actually numb the reader. And that is amazing!

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Hazel Durham 02 December 2012

Confusion and a fear of the intensity of life, great imagery and lovely flow! Amazing write for your age, well done!

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