Heaven Knows Poem by Jenny Nadine

Heaven Knows

Rating: 4.3


I'm dizzy
But I gotta get busy.
On a roll
Brain's running to'n'fro.
Head's spinning
Like a Top.
But Heaven Knows
I just can't stop.


(June 17th 2016)

Heaven Knows
Tuesday, June 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: agony,ailment,alliteration,anxiety,business,busy,challenges,deliverance,dignity,dilemma
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was written very recently and was inspired by an actual small dizzy spell as a symptom of perimenopause triggered by stress, anxiety and being overwhelmed to complete college course writing assignments on time.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Latha Govindasamy 21 June 2016

Good one. Take care.

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Ernest Makuakua 22 June 2016

please please don't stop heaven knows Love it loved still going to love it its too inspiring. Like a spring stepped i'm going to eject, i'm going to jump powerful work keep writing

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Jenny Taylor 22 June 2016

Wow, thanks Ernest! I'm happy you were moved.; -)

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Atasha Williams 22 June 2016

Let's hope that doesnt happen to you again Jenny, when you feel stressed again, come here to Poem Hunter, we will help ease your stress. :)

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Jenny Taylor 22 June 2016

Wow, thanks my sis! I feel the love here, indeed! ; -)

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 June 2016

Brain's running to'n'fro. such a powerful expression conveying all that is happening in the brain, in the mind, in the body........very good poem full of ideas......... tony

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Jenny Taylor 21 June 2016

Oh my, I appreciate your candidly positive comments! ! Thanks a million, Dr. Brahmin, for my perfect rating! ! I look forward to reading your work and hearing more from you! Jen

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Unwritten Soul 21 June 2016

You helped people to understand what it feels if they on your shoes...a nice poem, i like the smooth flow :)

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Jenny Taylor 21 June 2016

Wow, thanks Soul! ! That was certainly my intention, plus to reach those who could relate. Thanks for your kind comments! ! ; -0

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Jenny Taylor 21 June 2016

Thanks, Latha! Great to hear from you as my first comment!

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