July Poem by Uriah Hamilton

July

Rating: 5.0


Girls walk slowly
In the sunshine,
And an old man
Is arranging flowers
At the floral shop.

My best friend Luna
Has on a yellow skirt
And smiles sweetly
At the cops.

I never want
July to end,
Everything is exciting
And unimaginably hot.

The stars will dance
When the sun is not
Any longer in the sky.

I tremendously enjoy
Every nuance of this life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amberlee Carter 18 May 2005

hmm, it wasn't worded as well as I would of liked..meaning, you could of gotten more reaction from the reader..however, there is something beautiful about this piece, just the way it is...

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