Killing Time Poem by Vincent Dali

Killing Time



Killing time
‘Cause time don’t mind
Time never stops
Just has the sun never drops
From the widespread sky
Yet tears dropp from its eyes
Wonders why it cries
Looking at the night sky dominated by the stars and moon
They give no reply
They answer no questions or give any reasons why
Beyond that sky are worlds that exist and thrive
The mind inside its imagination is always alive
Dreaming as it wrote it
It awoken to find a sleeping poet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amber Vasquez 07 April 2009

I found this poem as wonderful as your others. Keep writting!

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Fiona Davidson 06 April 2009

Excellent write Vincent....good flow to this...10

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Greenwolfe 1962 03 April 2009

I think this is a good writing, although the rhythm is a little affected by some of the wording which can easily be fixed. Overall, a nice piece. GW62

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