Let It Flow... Poem by indira babbellapati

Let It Flow...



allow time to flow
to let everything
wash off in the flow

turn not time into
a stagnant puddle
breeding thoughts

that sting and sound
like nagging mosquitoes!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nthabiseng Kgoronyane 28 June 2012

Nice one!

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and who else but my indi (R) a can give music to cocophony of ticking

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Valerie Dohren 01 July 2012

Time, , the great healer - good write.

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Unwritten Soul 01 July 2012

Let it flow and it make me go...follow the flow..so short but nice a pleasing verses. Like it_Unwritten Soul

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 29 June 2012

allow time to flow allow thoughts to share allow hands to help allow mind to rest at peace always! !

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Saadat Tahir 29 June 2012

A perfect poetic accompaniment to the gathering clouds....the monsoon is awaited, almost upon us now, and its thoughts fostered over millennia by our farming forefathers…a beautiful metaphor there…the puddles the mosquito stings…..indiraji you have constructed a time lapse photography and pasted it as a layer onto the deeper mortal worries of flesh and blood. Very tender and nice write…deep and directed too kudos

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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