Nervous Poem by Gabriella Franco

Nervous

Rating: 5.0


I'm nervous
I've never done this before
September 5th...
My first time

I ask my friend to drive me here
I walk inside
So nervous
I called before I came

They said they could check
But they weren't so happy
Oh no. I await bad news
Then she says, cheerfully

Hey! No you only
work tomorrow from
12-3! one shift this week
Here's your first paycheck!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Steve Hagget 06 September 2006

I too liked this - keeps the guessing going and well pulled together, thanks Steve

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kAy BaRCeLon 06 September 2006

Great intro... Like a movie you can select the ending. Nice read! I Like it! Thanks,

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Kelly Allen Vinal 06 September 2006

Congratulations on your job and another great poem!

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