Pray For Me Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Pray For Me

Rating: 5.0


When you whisper the melody of your tears
Among green prayers of your hands for years
Pray for me
I'm deaf and blind but kind, remove my fears
I want your love, my love my eyes my ears

(2008/9/4)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M M 04 September 2008

A beautiful poem, both short and meanful. The short center of the poem -'pray for me'-, circled by longer lines gives a real strenght to your thought. Very well penned! 10

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Thad Wilk 04 September 2008

Ahh, she's the one to remove your fears Her love shall be, your eyes and ears! Great read Shiraz! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Anjali Sinha 04 September 2008

shiraz, so beautiful! ! ! ! melody of tears deaf and blind but love be eyes and ears. +10 to you and this goes to my fav list. regards anjali

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Tsira Goge 05 September 2008

Nightingale you sing closed by eyes, differently you cannot sing... On it at you it is a lot of enemies, especially at night... You are kind also the god with you... 10... Tsira

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 September 2008

yeah, I pray for u dear nightingle of shiraz your love would be yours. I donno wy cant click 10...option is inactive. anyway Allah bless U

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 14 January 2009

Yet another great write from you and it seems so sincere too. Keep up the good work. :)

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toruk macto 24 September 2008

I love how it rhymes... :)

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Patricia Bankhead 19 September 2008

Wonderful write! We all need prayers. Thanks for sharing. Pat~

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... ... 17 September 2008

I like it because it sounds musical. Lovely writing! Miss you!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 September 2008

A wonderful short poem: Pray for me. Very nice.

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